:D & :o

awesome track

Great

The ambient noise really gives mood. I could say that the drumming is too complex, or the mix is too mushed but those things kinda make the song what it is. Great job

Interesting how...

You have the backrgound following the main melody instead of leading it in or staying on pace with it... I know its a small part of the song but you're obviously at a good enough level to be receive helpful criticism for small things.