yep @dragonfruitreal was spot-on with the key change, i think that can bring a lot of energy if you're trying to create a climactic ending. i love this song
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[lyrics]
a million feathers are weighing down on me
i'm stuck here forever can't find a place to be
it's supposed to be my endeavor; illuminating the sea
but here i am with my broken wings, looking for a way out
all of these crushing weights are tethering me down
i'll keep searching for a way to leave and find my ground
it's supposed to be my endeavor; illuminating the sea
so here i am with my hopes and dreams, looking for a way out
i'm stuck inside this twisted maze
my wings are all flayed, i need to find my escape
i'll burn down all of my doubts and wash away the rain
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[credit]
vocal: SOLARIA (Synthesizer V)
lyrics/music/art/video by: me (mididuck)
- not a huge fan of the inclusion of the high pitched vocal chops at the very beginning I think it might be better if you were to wait to introduce them until that part at like 29 seconds or so
- love the energy of the first drop
- I LOVE THAT KEY CHANGE NEAR THE END!!!!!! SO COOL!!!!!
- idk what that glitchy synth sound is in the background during the last part but it sounds so cool
- everything from 1:55 to the end is fucking perfect please make more stuff like that
- one issue is the vocals kinda sound like they're being crushed by the instrumental a bit at some parts but now that I think about it that fits with the theme of the song so that actually kinda works lol
overall wonderful song 5 stars
mididucc responds:
thank you for the well thought out feedbacks, i really appreciate comments like these! i do see some of the problems you mentioned but i often get to a certain point in the process of making the song where i feel kinda lost and confused on how and what to fix. but it is very ncie to see people pick up on these too. i will definitely try to perfect my crafts! once again thank you for the feedback, the kind words and the listen. i hope u have a great day kind stranger!
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