Hola buenas, muy buena cancion Ryzmik, me ha inspirado para hacer un nivel en geometry dash, saludos desde latino america :)
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FINISHED!!!! I just wanted to upload it as soon as possible! Hope this pays off for the long inactivy.
Making this was a trip full of adrenaline, at first I didn't mind finish this back in September, but I saw some inspiration and decided to give it a proper arrangement. I've never felt so proud of finish a track like this one.
What do you think of this style and my new phasing (xtrullor wannabe) bass? Took me two hours designing it...
For anyone curious, I made the vocals joining vocal shots that already came chopped in a ssmplepack.
Kicking butt as usual. I love checking in every once in a while to see what wild stuff you're coming out with. You've improved so much over the years, it's crazy.
In terms of synths and mixing, it's about perfect to my ears. My favorite synths are the modulating acid-like arpeggio and, of course, everything about the drop. Compositionally, though, I feel like the first minute is superior to the rest. The non-drop parts after the intro lack conviction, and the additional synth lines in the second drop detract from its power instead of complementing it. I like the choice of vocal chops, but their sound here is admittedly a bit on the amateur side, and their placement throughout the song is timid as if you didn't really know where to use them. Human vocals command attention by nature, so their relative quietness in the mix seems odd.
I was all ready to kiss your ass, but I figured writing actual criticism would be kinder. Still belongs on my playlist, though.
Ryzmik responds:
Thank you for the great review DoubleDenial, I always appreciate constructive criticism! It was the first time I use vocal chops as a main element in a song so I understand they sound a bit random at the drop.
This has some really solid MDK vibes. If you clean up the mix so the basses aren't overpowering the mix, I probably would have you confused with them. Solid sound design
Ryzmik responds:
I didn't know this sounds like MDK, I had only listen his music in Geometry Dash. Thank you for the comparison!
Holy shit, this goes really hard! The arrangement is well done, and that makes the song more interesting to listen to. The mix is pretty clean in my opinion, and there really isn't much else to improve it. The drop is well made, but I would alternate/merge the growls together with some really clean supersaws to make it a tiny bit fuller and more emotive.
Overall, really nice track! Are you participating in the NGUAC this year?
Ryzmik responds:
Thanks so much, and great to see you again SpeedoRH!
No, I didn't enter this NGUAC, this time I prefered the NGADM!! :O
not here for critizimzs, very clean mix +1000 aura
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