I like it a lot. Imo, it's good enough to get ya scouted. There's always room for improvement, especially when it comes to mixing/mastering but you seem to have mostly nailed the structual part of the tune, except for a couple hickups here and there. But bottom line is: the song's pretty solid. I'd just like to see more of an artist profile so that the source of your tunes is more trustworthy and so that one can actually see who's behind and not that it's some reupload when the tune itself is actually stolen. So yeah, I'm looking forward to more music from you, I'll definitely keep an eye out.