Get rid of the drums

Get rid of the drums. They don't go with the music at all. It's hard to make music sound interesting sometimes without the drums. But if you can pull it off, you know your music is good. This song is too upbeat for drums. Get rid of them and add some strings instead.

I'm jaded...

This is the last song I'm listening to. I've ran through 30 or so.....I'll just give you a 10 weather you deserve it or not. I'm an ass aren't I.

Ok ok ok. On a side note the beat is a little too plain and seems out of place of the melody. What's your thoughts. Anyway. 10!