This, along with my other submissions are not finished. I have a very hard time coming up with endings to songs. I will post the final product when my creativity let's me finish things that I start.
Almost superb.
I like this piece, I really do, but I have to state that the opening chord is a true killer for this piece... You have such a wonderful feel going through the entire rest of the piece, that I think that, if you simply cut that opening chord out, this piece would be almost perfect.
I'm glad you put that chord in the beginning, though... Nothing is more shocking after listening to a piece like this, than a sudden and jarring cacophony right at the end.
So did you like the chord in the beginning or not? I was confused by the last part of your review.
Good Song
It's a good song... there's just two main things I would fix.
The first, is the first synth chord before the piano starts playing seems really out of place.
The second, is I would heavily reccomend adding in some light cymbal for the drums.
Other than that, it's all good in my opinion.
Thank you, I was debating with myself for a while whether or not to leave the chord in. I think I finally decided to keep it because I wanted the listener to feel the relaxing calm of success after overcoming difficult and sometimes annoying challenges.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Satoris 
