Nice!! I like your use of panning at the beginning.
If I were to give a piece of feedback, it would be to take more time with your transitions and to weave things in and out more. Silky smooth transitions are super important because they stop the listener from getting lost. If you want a sudden change to invoke shock or surprise, you can hint at it with a little bit of a warm-up, just so the listener knows something is about to happen :)
I've only listened to it briefly and I don't really know much about your music style, so take it with a large pinch of salt :)
Awesome song though, you absolutely nailed what you were going for. I had never actually thought about the psychological impact mind control would have on the victim after they're released. pretty interesting to think about