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Dude, I gotta say... nice job
The bass - Amazing tune, jazzy rave ordeal.
The melody - I love it, it's so modern and melodic!
The beat - Very nice even though it's been used. Still very good. Almost comferting.
Other - The breaks are amazing
Overall - I think this is your best song, I'm Glad you made it long.
Recomendations - The beat was quiet. And had no effects.
Other than that. great song