This is wild!

I would back off cymbal volume in your intro -- with nothing else in that sonic space, it's not hard for them to stick out like a sore thumb in terms of volume.

Also, utterly nuts to hear LMMS in the context of a track like this.

In terms of the argent elements, I really think these guitars could be pushed even harder, or a sturdier, gritty bass laid underneath. For argent, it sounds a bit dry. But that's aside from my judging in NGADM. The track is perfectly serviceable in all other aspects, just a tad sibilant, and a bit sparser than I was expecting in terms of arrangement (the sibilance also lends to this somewhat)

Lead writing, chord progressions, pacing, and arrangement are all top notch. Great work! PS, congrats on the front page!

8.4/10