shallow but cool :>
Sounds good especially the end but also kind of shallow , good work!
Author Comments
Turn up your volume!
I'm back with this new Breakcore song wich took me weeks to complete, I'm not satisfied easely and I hope you like it :)
Please be gentle tho' this is my third real song ever made.
Have Fun! :D
03-12-09 UPDATE: I remastered this song so I could use it for my portfolio and uloaded the result here.
The drums at the end part are remixed for a stronger sound.
td6d responds:
Thanks! :)
ehhh...
idk but it needs somthing more like a really fast section but it was nice tho
Wait. What?
First off, I have to say, this song is awesome. I loved it.
I'm not an expert on what is drum and bass, and what isn't, but I just need to say that if you added some kind of insane electric guitar/synth/whatever right after 1:55, that would be awesome.
Which brings me to my problem. From 1:40 to about 2:00, it's like some kind of crazy build up. I was waiting for the explosion, but it never came. Perhaps it just me, but I think it needs some kind of crazy finisher after that.
td6d responds:
Hah, I see were you getting at.
I like the idea, I might just try that sometime!
Thanks for the feedback!
Alrighty. Pretty goood...
Hmm... Here's the blow by blow:
1. Intro: loving the fade in... Nice and smooth rise out of it..
2. Good job adding a pause afterwards, and then just immediately bringing in the drums
3. Hmm... this song sounds a bit creepy to mee... rather than happy.
4. Are those really xylophones? Hmm... I can'tt ell...
5. Great job with the breaks in the drums
6. Lol. Nice rise in pitch with the synths. That kept me interested.
7. Oh? Done already? Damn... I'm not one for short songs... kinda leaves me open-ended. But the song was great.
8. Great job. Much originality and diversity. I like that.
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Overview
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Well let's see... I don't believe I have any problems with this song... it was pretty well constructed and put together very nicely... although, that rise in pitch.. was a little bit weird for me... it was kind of odd hearing that like right in the middle of the song. It sounds more like something industrial or like darker rather than a happy type of song, if that is what you were aiming for. I feel it ended too abruptly. Just 'bam', it's over... and I was like "......? That's it? o.o Oh... okay. Nice." Nice use of reverb and delay at the end. I love songs that taper out that way. Great job though. A few things that bug me here and there, but I'm, over all, pleased with this production. (It really does sound like someone is having a serious phobia with xyolophones. I could imagine someone running away from it or something, screaming in terror XD) Great job, and I hope to hear more from you. Keep it real~
~[IZK]
td6d responds:
Wow thanks!
I think I never had such a huge review before! thanks again for that!
I love it that you really listend to it that 'intensely' tho' I never meant this song to be happy I understand your points.
I think I've grown a bit with music making since I made this song and I could clean it up a bit since there is a lot of distortion and not enough EQing but Im still pleased with the result as it is right now.
Thanks again for the review and there's more of my music at my overview page!
(let me warn you, its all pretty different than this song)
Oh wow
I love breakcore, this is amazing. Please, make more!
If I can offer any criticism, I think it may have sounded better with less echo effects.
Awesome song though!
td6d responds:
Thanks man, I didnt made any new songs lately but you might want to check out my other ones on newgrounds :)
Credits & Info
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4.67 / 5.00
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- 3:02 PM EDT
- Genre
- Drum N Bass
- File Info
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- 3 MB
- 2 min 10 sec
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