It's so beautiful...
It's like experiencing spring time at the crack of dawn on a mountain plain
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A little creation for NGADM Round 2.
It's so beautiful...
It's like experiencing spring time at the crack of dawn on a mountain plain
Amazing piece, but I feel like ending at 2:11 is a bit anticlimatic, I expected something really peak and extatic... Still loved it though, gave me some nostalgic dreamy vibes
I get the sense that the song had a long couple of buildups, which makes me feel disappointed that it basically ends at 2:11. I was feeling pretty invested in what you were leading up to. The balance is great and the mix is clean, although I'm not sure about the high hats. The choice of instrumentation is light and sweet, the choir especially fits in beautifully, although I'm not sure if I agree with your synth choice in 0:45 only because it seems so different from the rest of the song that you have. It may have worked out better if there was a big section that called back to it or referenced that section in a big way. Maybe you ran out of time or either bit off more than you could chew. Aside from that, it sound beautiful. It has nice transitions and has a playful and ethereal feel.
Nice little piece. The title fits it pretty well. Not much to say but good work :)
Thanks for feedback :3
I personally love doing long buildups, and there was a climax in the mockup, but I didn't have enough time and passion to finish it, so I changed the structure a bit (well, I need to stop doing my works at the last day before the deadline). As for the synth, I personally quite like it, although it is a little out of the arrangement. Maybe I will change it, if I do a revamp of this piece.
I swear, those crystal parts are so cool :D
Great song! For sure is gonna win round 2 of this deathmatch!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.