Ay good work on the frontpage! Sorry for responding so late
Very minimal, but also pretty! You’ve most definitely improved from last I talked to you! It’s a bit repetitive, and the hook at 1:39 is also a bit awkward. But I can tell you tried to to make it less repetitive by adding slightly different side melodies along with the main melody. At 2:27, the chiptune there could’ve been a little bit more on beat, I dunno, it just sounded a bit off, but I won’t mark you down too much for it.
Conclusion, you improved! Amazing work dude, keep it up! And do you use compressors, those could add a lot to your song, I learned how to use it by @Skankymojo, his advice helped a shit ton!