Not bad

I do enjoy it, you've got a good melody going. But personally, when I listen to techno, I like to go on a journey... I like the music to pick me up, take me somewhere, and then drop me off. This is usually achieved by a strong low end to the music, which I must say that your piece was lacking. Also, the drum beat didn't seem to help with that... it gave me the feeling of being in 'stop-and-go' traffic... it just didn't flow. I'd really like to see another version with some souped up bass and percussion, because I think this has potential.