This one had some interesting sounds.

As i said in the title this one had some interesting sounds, i like how this starts out and such, and keeps you interested you have a good imagination with this one. And as i get more into this one it seems like a trance of some sorts, has a dark touch yet has an entertaining feel to it so was notbad. was not a very long one but was still a good tune. And as it does come to an end you finish it finely and ends how it should. im sure there could be some more things you can add to it but for the mostpart i like what you have done here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well let me see as i said there are some things that could be improved on just a few things here or there, just a touch up or two. And with this particular piece, i suppose it could be a tad longer and maybe some more backround efect of sounds would also be nice.

could be better

Its not terribly bad..

It could have been longer
A little louder

Other than that i just like the feel of wanting to dance to this.