asdasdasd
This is really good, but the drums are weak. Thats really the only complaint I have. Besides that, its well structured with nice effects and guitar playing. Good work! I like giving out 10's!
FULL TITLE:
Chasing the Line of Reason: Chapter III of the Icarus Flight
I was seriously considering keeping this off NG, mainly because there are still a few little things to be fixed in the song, but meh.
This is my first "professionally recorded" demo.
The only effects added were the reverb on the section after the 2nd chorus, and some synth work. I was thinking of putting some pitch correction in there, but I could never get the damn plugin to go to the right note. It actually went further away from the correct note with this plugin, lol, so I figured, I'll leave it as is.
HEY HEY, IT'S LYRICS:
I have been lost for many years
Crashing down in another world
Looking left, is anyone here?
I just see a lifeless girl
Have I found something real?
How did these wounds ever heal?
Take a step into insanity
There's nothing left to lose
There was nothing to see
Chorus:
Here I go, across this line
Wondering if I lost what's mine
Passing stars by
I think back on it now, that beautiful summer
The grass was tall, the sun, it shone so bright
You were with me then, do you remember forever?
It ended so soon, take this fuse, watch it ignite
What I need to know
"Is it just another lie?"
Just take the screen away, is it what I see?
Inside the hole
Thinking outside the sky
I want to escape, but I feel like I could die
(Standing in the center of fate)
-Chorus-
Can I take your hand this time?
Because a different fate is so hard to find
Reason's on the line
Can I ask you now, to show me the real world?
Promise I won't cry, just to know how I should feel
Please just take me away, far away from here
Synthetic memories, are what fuel my fear
I can feel them near
Take me out into something real and
Tell me I'll see you there, holding out your hand
-Chorus x2-
PS: Extra points to anyone who can spot the 30 Seconds to Mars reference, lol. :P
asdasdasd
This is really good, but the drums are weak. Thats really the only complaint I have. Besides that, its well structured with nice effects and guitar playing. Good work! I like giving out 10's!
Thanks, man. :)
Heh, I'll keep it in mind to work on the drums.
Thanks again for the review, I appreciate it. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.