I think the beginning to this track is alright. It's slow, maybe a bit too slow for a race atmosphere, and the ending isn't anywhere the length of the beginning to compensate, but I don't think that it's bad, it builds the tension up nicely. The melody later on is fun, I like the chords. I also like the progression. I think that around 2:24 something could be done with the mix, as the main melody clashes with the really fast notes in the background that I don't know how to call. The transition to the slow section could be done a bit better, maybe some tweaks to the reverb would help, but I definitely get the atmosphere I think you were going for. And the comeback to the main melody is also nice. Overall while I wouldn't say I like it, it is definitely neat. There are things I like about this one, but it might not just be my genre. There's definitely more of a racing vibe here than a chill one, but I still can get hints of the latter especially near the middle