its good
heres some constructive critisicm though.. lower the volumne on your snare.. I understand snare is the most important thing to hear in a drum set but right your snare is way overpowered.. All i hear is melody and then snare every other beat.. lower that and it should be fine... also I would take out the claps in the beginning of the song since u dont use them through the rest of the song.. I kinda feel like u wanted to use all ur drum effects in one song and a song actually sounds worse if u try to use all of your effects and try to use all of your techniques in one song.. but on the bright side.. the melody is quick but its Idk how to describe it.. its not happy or dark.. its like inbetween.. like the dark side branching out into the light side.. so good job with that one.. but yeah man I love the outro when it slows down and shit thats good right there.. but yeah u got some talent.. keep it up
mjattie 
