Pretty well done.
I love the fountain of dreams! And to all of those below me, this really is called "Fountain of Dreams". In all of the Kirby Games (except for superstar) this song only appears on the fountain of dreams stages and is even titled as such on certain games with sound check and what not. In superstar it is titled Gourmet Race, but it has a different feel to it than fountain of dreams.
Now for the song review.
I like the overall layout of the song. It isn't anything to get over excited about though. The sounds all sound the same, and the ending is pretty bad. Also, the beginning was very abrupt. Also, it sounded pretty repetitive. If the sounds changed some more, that might make it sound less so. Considering that this is a techno song and not trance, I can't say bad about the sounds used.
I think you did a good job on this song, though I bet if you put some more time into it, you could create a better begging and end, which would be very helpful.
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