Yeah..

It's not that it's bad. The pad in the background sounds nice.
But the beat is really cut and paste. The first sign of an uninspired song is over half of it having the bass on every beat. Kinda boring. And the hat did not diversify enough.

I as well did not find the beep to be the best choice for the instrument for the melody. It was okay, though.

And overall, I like the mix. Not bad for that.
Keep at it.

dude...daaa

well, this isn't really a techno, more like a trance. Good yes, but not as a techno man. but i can tell when you get further along with you music making, you'll be come much better. keep up the good work and i will enjoy hearing your progress.

Hmmm

It was not to bad could of been better but it's really good

Catchy.

It has sort of a mystic rythm, good job.

im sorry but

You lost me after the 1st 30 seconds
i couldn't feel the mood of the song whatsoever
that beep was kinda lifeless
very plain and dry just like my hamburgers
sounds like your using fruity loops, experiment a little more with the different functionalities they give you. Dont give up keep on making music.