Nice!

This was good man, and I'm glad, also, that you can save your progress now XD.

What I heard that you could work on, mainly are really too things...

1) Instrumentally, the song lacked. You did good with switching the melody and also allowing around 1:30. But still, the fact that you only had those two sounds going the entire time made it seem a tad repetitive.

2) It didn't sound like your song was leading anywhere. This really ties in with my first point. If you had more instruments or sounds to utilize, you wouldn't have really gotten this effect.

Good job though, I'm not complaining XD.

And I ususally don't put this, but I will since I asked you to PM this for meXD.

8/10 4/5 =3