hmm

It could be heavier. Was it your intention for it to be so light and sparkly? If so then it comes off better for it.

The kick rolls later on sort of came off a little disjointed.

This track would make such an awesome heavy mix. Add some actual bass, heavier drums, fuzzier lead synths and effects. It'd be fantastic.

It is what it is as it is, and I get the feeling you wanted it to be this way so, gj on that. i guess.

too soft

could be better