great little song
i dont know much about the story this is the first time im listening to any of your stuff. i did like the use of the piccolo flute scales and the piano. i think the flute was over used a little ...or maybe you can just lower the treble on them a little ..otherwise i thought what you have here is a great little idea..im gonna go check out your other stuff
keep up the good work
and if you have time please check out my music
i appreciate other musicians opinions