Kind of neat, but unoriginal in a way

This is pretty good, but the uh... variation is lacking here. It seems like you're getting used to how garage band loops work together, and that's cool, you've made a pretty good compilation here. The only thing is, these are a bunch of neat sounds kind of stapled together in a weird way.
This isn't great, but it definitely could have been a lot worse. I'd try mixing some of your own stuff in with the loops to make it more if an identifiable song. Too much GB not enough you.