Well

it was kind of short and there wasnt a lot of the beat but it was good kind of

The truth.

I hate giving bad reviews, but I also hate not being honest. First of all, there's a slight gap in the loop. Second, to me it just sounds like you picked random notes that just happened to make some sense. Your music doesn't really say anything to me. I'm sorry if I hurt you a little with this review, but it's all part of learning and improving. Criticism improves us =) Even though you may not necessarily like this review, I hope you find it helpful and will continue to make more music =]

Can´t catch the beat

I usually like complex beats but this goes a little too far. Try putting the snares/claps on the 2 and 4 of the beat. That would make the song more fluent