I really like this.

It's nice, calm, and very relaxing.

good start

cool track to start things off

idea, style, and melody r all really cool

but each could use a little improvement

idea - the nature sounds r nice... but the loop is kind of just thur in the bg.
like try to make it fit the song more specifically.
for example those same nature sounds can be thrown on lots of dif songs n still work... rather than only working on this song n really enchancing just this song.
dunno if u get what i mean lol...

style - the style is pretty much perfect... suits the idea very well. but u could use some drums lol

melody - awesome melody... but a few of the notes r off at times (on the strings)...

neways keep it up

ill contribute... eventually... lol im busy -___-

K-Dm

One problem.

The only thing I saw wrong with the music was that you didnt create those cricket noises. But, I normally don't care about that. Neither will anyone else. It was very simple and more like background music than anything. Would go great with a point n click game where you are in a forest and need to get out. Very atmospheric.

Near 1:40 it got really good. You make it just the way I do. You did great with the build up.

On the downside of things, I noticed some off tune notes in there that hurts you ears every now and then. For a beginner in ambient, this was a great start for making music.

Good job!

^^ =)

cool ambient , but it could be more percussion =)

Not bad...

This would make great backround music. I think the only problem is that there should be a bit more percussion, to keep it as interesting as it can be.