T4DnN - Waiting Here

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T4DnN - Waiting Here

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This is one of my FIRST (yes 1st..) Original song that includes my vocals.

During the middle of the song there is a vocal part which is in Korean.

Lyrics!

*Don't make me wait too long.
But I still love you.
If I wait too long I lose hope.*
I still love you, Hope you still know that.

I'm still waiting here on the dance floor.
But I can't wait here... Forever...

The Translation is within the "*"

Hope everyone enjoyed it!
Thanks! =]

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Shenkhar

2008-06-17 02:13:17

Nice job

You did a good job with the instruments (really good for using 3 x osc), the build up worked well. Only things I think you could improve on are the melodies repetitive nature and "genericness". Other than that, nice work!

- Shenkhar

LoHH1989 responds:

Thx~! =]
also yeah i felt it was kinda repetitive also but i still like it xD
sticks to the head =]
Also your stuff is really good too~! =]
but yeah ill try to tone down and try to improve for the better~! =]
But thanks for the info~! more comments means i can learn from it and get better=]

delfofthebla

2008-06-16 19:49:36

Not Bad

It's good, and I hit Gamerkc hit the mark on that one. Song>Vocals. Very well done for first song though, keep it up.

LoHH1989 responds:

Lol well I made a lot more songs but it was very plain and simple.. X.X
I usually remix for fun cuz im not really creative with "composing" but for some reason I magically started playing around and I came out with this Lol

xD Thank you though~! =]]
and Ill make sure Ill improve to be 10 ratings! =]

Gamerkc

2008-06-16 19:17:47

Good song.

I liked it. It wasn't EXTREEM or HARDCOAR, but it made me tap my feet. Good work, especially considering it's one of your first tracks.

I see potential in you.

Howeva, the vocals fell flat compared to the rest of the song, you seemed distant.

Try to put more enthusiasm in your vocals, or get them to flow with the song. What I mean is, pretend * is a beat:

* * *
Now, onemoretime.

See? It would be better if it flowed like this:

* * * *
Now, one more time.

Sorry if it's hard to comprehend. I tried. :O

LoHH1989 responds:

Haha Thanks~! =]
I tried but I cant sing for crap xD
But This is just for fun =]
Still glad its somewhat enjoyable though~! =]
Thanks again!
btw I understand what u mean though xD