I made a bunch of tunes the other day and had a real hard time trying to build them into some kind of song... In the end I made three versions, and decided 'what the hell! let's make them a 3-part series.
This is Part 1
The man left the decrepit shack that was once his home, once his house. A meager pack of food and various belongings were with him, other than that nothing but a few scruffy clothes. He doesn't know where he's going, he just has to leave... but he can't remember why... something he did? No... something he was going to do? He pushes it to the back of his mind, it doesn't matter. He starts heading down the steep hill on which his 'house' rested upon.
Something suddenly pops up in his mind, a blur of colours, screams, blood, betrayal, traitors... a knife? No a stick... A hand? Defenitely a hand. He begins to realize what has happened when a rock, seemingly from nowhere, appears in front of his foot, shattering his concentration and his ankle, falling, screaming and another rock... this one to the head.
ok, i REALLY liked this
its wonderfully relaxing and energized at the same time. I can't think of a single thing I would do different to build upon this. You should be proud of this. ohh, lovin' the cool down at 1:33. liquid enjoyment. You should be really proud of this. DEFFENTELY a favorite.
If you loved this, you'll die if you hear part 3 'Omega'. Or you might not lol, but I defenitely thought this was the worst of the 3 parts.
Glad you liked it though I worked really long on this one
-M
cool!!
wow this is really good, nice work
Audio tales
Very good song, I really liked the concept of giving a sort of written background story so that people could really feel into the music. I think that you made a good musical interpretation of what you were trying to tell in this story.
Musically, the song was really good, with interesting instrument sections (I especially liked the bells at the end, they gave the song a mystical, perhaps even a bit creepy atmosphere).
I enjoyed listening to the song, i hope you'll submit the other parts soon!
the other parts are already done, just give me 10 or so minutes to write up the story for it :D
EDIT: only allowed two submissions per day :(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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