Quite cool

The loop worked perfectly. And the main bass is quite good, and the hi-hat, kick and crash really suit it aswell. My only problem is the fact that some of the bass notes seem a bit off near the end. Just like flat or something. But other than that it's quite good, especially for a first go :D

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Good bass

I would like to see you take this further, by adding other instruments to it. Given that it's a pure piece of bass and a little additional percussion, you've got little to do to that and adding a melody would certainly take it a lot further.

I think that this piece sets the bar quite high, so expectations will be running high for your next tune ;)

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Niice.

I think it was very well done-- Unfortunatly, at some points you ended the note too fast, making it a bit choppy, and I couldn't figure when the song was starting or ending (Good thing.). My only suggestion is that you make a bit more variety of different notes but it was good.
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Not Bad

This was quite the random little tune. :P Right when it seems to establish melody it goes into some kind of strange choppy thing. That kind of disrupted the rhythm a bit, but it wasn't a big deal at all.
The percussion really fits this tune like a glove, it's really what completed this song and gave it a catchy song, for me at least.
If you were to take this and add some electronic effects I could see this being a nice dance track. It just has that kind of feel to it. :P
Overall it was a fun little listen, not bad at all for a first try. Good work!

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Neat Loop

Okay so this loop is pretty good, I mean as well as being your first work this is okay and pretty decent. Although the ending part of this loop seems to mess up a little from what I can hear of it, seems to just go kind of sloppy, not sure if you can hear that yourself, lol. As for looping, it does seem to loop pretty well but there is a slight pause between the start and the end.

The main playing of the thing in this is okay and sounds pretty good from what I can hear of it, no problems with the main body of it, the only thing I'm not keen on is the ending. So other than that, good work on this loop, hope you can create things a little longer than this in the future.

3/5

<3

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