I like this one and some really good sound you have shown here, Good tune you have here to be honest it was a good piece and has a certain kick to it Another track here with some decent Rhythm And so thats that a good tune here, The quality is also very good with nice depth, with a nice and unique vibe about it you really gave this a kick and I like how that payed off in results, some good track here a nice sound

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Chilly

feels floaty

loved the offbeat snare fading in and out.
the last half is a nice melody, but it did feel a little too bare. beginning is looping again, though, and that's just solid.
the 0nly con I pick is the second half doesn't feel fleshy. the beat gets too pulse'y. maybe a little stepped frantic track would give the ears something to follow.
it's a great leadout tunnel effect, but maybe the offbeat drum could kick out every other repeat, so that track has a complex fade as well.

hmmm

okay, so there are pros and cons for this song, ill start off with the pros
the melody thats in the song is catchy and makes you tap your foot when you listen to it, it was quite good.
unfortunately i have more cons than pros.. sorry..,
okay to start off with, as said below, the chord progressions with that synth didnt fit with the drums, sounded off and didnt fit, maybe you could of used a different synth, or changed the chords into another catchy melody, and staying on the topic of melodys, just one melody? it got way too repetitive as it was only one melody, kind of got the listener bored after a while, but i said said in the pros, it was catchy. and as said below, the snare is way too loud.. maybe turn it down a little bit
all in all, i can see potential in this song, if you just worked on it a little more, and lengthened it.
now because of all that im giving you 3/5 and 7/10
but if this was worked on, i could see this doing well

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wow

absolutly amazing
fabulouse
keep em comin n great work

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