This is my First Submit so Please Comment and Rate :) thanks
kinda looses the beat.
i do not understand the point of the accents, being so loud, and you might want to try using a metronome (a flashing light version so you can see it, and we don't hear it.
this could be a better song, with it staying on beat.
also, if this is you "first submission" what is the other one that you submitted a month ago?!?!
I thought that submission didn't go through but it did so it really isn't. sorry for the confusion and thanks for the review
Thanks
Kinda sounds like a folk song- which I like.
Thanks for you review
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
CharlieRisingMoon 
WouterPiano 
NeoAstro 
