hip n bass?
this is not bad for your second submission. mine was more crappy than this one ^^ I have to say this is more hiphop than dnb, you should change the genre in my opinion. remember, it is drum and BASS. and the bassline here is just too leadless and thin to be dnb ;) I still like the choirs...
put some lyrics on it and this could do a great job! if you need some help on FL let me know, I'm learning too and I'm bit better so hit me up, and check some of my tracks ^^