Hmmm

The core of it was very nice, the melody as you called it was good. But it just seemed a bit all over the place. Like the song had no direction. And some of the sounds just didn't fit the song at all.Needs some work

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wasn't repetitive

but lacked in any binding sounds that were consistent throughout, very little along the lines of a beat in other words, what you have would be good if you put something behind it to regulate it, to me it felt all over the place, find some common rhythm and stick to it

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Needs improvement

There wasn't a solid strucure in this song, and overall, it sounded quite "messy" if I dare to say. Unless the unoriginality of the begining, it wasn't bad but when it get rhythmed, it sounded unsynchronized. Then it gets better but you need to work more with the drums. From 1:17 to the end, it has nothing in common with the beginin of the song and all these "explosion" sounds made the song ununderstandable. It really needs work.

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It's quite a good attempt, but the problem here is that you don't have a real structure in the song.

Also, sometimes the song sounds too overloaded. There is too much stuff going on at the same time (for example at 0:29).

Overall, it's a nice try, but needs some more work here and there.

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Needs work

It's not a bad attempt at a melody, but it does have something a little off with it - sometimes, the tunes do go against one another, so you need to listen to that and pick out the parts that conflict, in order to repair them. Without doing this, it just sounds messy.

Still, I can see this one coming further with time, then you would be able to make it longer and add some more intricate variation to the piece.

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