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Paff!

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Paff! This is a cool song.

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Wow nice

So this was a nice tune here I like the sound of this and I guess it was kind of short but still not too bad but I did enjoy what you have created here with some solid work some solid sound and some solid vibe

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Very nice stuff could be longer I suppose

~X~

Well.

I'm going to have to agree with everyone here when they said that the end was too abrupt and the static made it sound a bit bad. If you could work on the ending alone then I think the score of your audio would be much better! The guitar and the drums went together very well. The only other thing that could of been worked on a little bit more would be the length of the submission. If these things were worked on a bit then this would be a great submission.

C52

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svere responds:

Thanks for the review! But to be honest, I like my songs short and simple.

\m/

I like that song. The guitars and drums go along very well together. Also the guitar plays some very nice tunes.

The problem is that the single riffs that the guitar plays are only connected very loosely with each other, so that it seems as if there's someone who just wants to show off, instead of play a nice song for the audience.

Also, the ending is too abrupt and there is a lot of static noise in there. Either try to edit the noises out or cut off the whole ending and replace it with something else (maybe end the song with another "Paff!").

{ Review Request Club }

svere responds:

This song is all about showing off, hehe :D but thanks for the review!

Interesting

I'm not sure about the start and finish of this song. There's about a second and a half of silence, which coudl easily be cut, just to make the thing sound better. The static loaded rambling at the end could also either be tidied up or cut out completely to make the production a lot better.

Not sure about the lyric, but if that's what you've got to do, then that's what you've got to do.

I did like the guitar in it and you could have done with a lot more of it - throwing in things like a 20-30 second solo would have really added an explosive kick to the piece overall.

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svere responds:

Thanks for a great review! And the silence in the beginning is cause this was on a cd i burned so there were a small time between the songs.

rock on

that was pretty good, a little short, and the ending could be better, but those were the only draw back to this, all the instruments were played brilliantly and went well with the other instruments, and though some others have said the singing in the background was unnecessary; I disagree, it added a lot to what would otherwise become repetitive, great song

.:Review Request Club:.

svere responds:

Woo, thanks for a nice review!

Credits & Info

Listens
1,608
Downloads
87
Votes
10
Score
3.58 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 23, 2008
5:04 AM EDT
Genre
General Rock
File Info
Song
1.5 MB
1 min 4 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.