Interesting
I'm not sure about the start and finish of this song. There's about a second and a half of silence, which coudl easily be cut, just to make the thing sound better. The static loaded rambling at the end could also either be tidied up or cut out completely to make the production a lot better.
Not sure about the lyric, but if that's what you've got to do, then that's what you've got to do.
I did like the guitar in it and you could have done with a lot more of it - throwing in things like a 20-30 second solo would have really added an explosive kick to the piece overall.
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