Very good work!
Throughout the entire composition, a depressive, and sometimes even frightening feeling of anxiety did not leave me...
The atmosphere is perfectly conveyed
Would be perfect for any other horror project.
Author Comments
It has an abrupt ending that will make you question your life choices.
I still suck with FL
Please understand.
I figured if I post everything I do, someone will see my desperate need of assitance and will be willing to show me the ropes.
Don't forget your place in space and time while you listen!
xxUltimaWeapon responds:
Hey, I'm glad you got a good vibe and setting out of this one! This was my first upload I did all by myself as a wee 16 year old and got surprisingly good feedback on it back in its time. Glad you enjoyed, man. Really stoked you went through all my old stuff, it was fun remembering they existed after going through your reviews! My 2015 uploads are where you can tell I actually start to learn little things and begin comprehending FL Studio =3
Again, thank you for the deep dive!
It feels dark!
Anyway, I'm just a ordinary person with no experience creating any sort of music at all, but I am curious, were the transitions between the parts made rough on purpose to help exaggerate the title? I mean, it feels to me like three different songs kinda mashed together or something.
Excuse me if I use the wrong terminology, too. I fail at musicalness of any sort, lol. Anyway, I was thinking that if it wasn't on purpose, then maybe you could reorder the song some. Like, from :42-1:02 could be the intro. After that, maybe try to integrate something similar the beginning part to build up to the climax, and then bring about an abrupt and painfully pleasurable end....
Or maybe just chop it up and make different tunes out of it. I could see that happening, too. *Shrug* Anyway, while I like what you've gotten so far, it definitely needs some work. Hope my opinion helped, and that you can get someone to help you soon. ^^
xxUltimaWeapon responds:
Dude, it's nice when someone actually gives you a legit review. Just to be plain and simple, this was the second song I ever made with Fruity Loops and nothing was planned out. It just kind of happened. I kind of just skeeted this out onto newgrounds. But yeah, if I ever actually get good with a mixer, i'll remake this = P
Good
Shame it's hard to find sadists, and easy to find masochists.
At 43, it's really cool. The ending could use speed and work.
A great song!
Keep up the great work!
Yes Please!
This is total sex. Its a really good song.
xxUltimaWeapon responds:
= D
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