Alright so not a bad tune here it was interesting and i like the vibe you gave off on this, so nice job here i suppose there are some things that can be worked on but thats a few words for later, you do have something interesting. This here was not a bad tune and i do like the slow tune this starts out with, there does seem to need a more ending to it kind of like a sort of climax and whatnot. but sofar i do like what you have presented here. And overall with this piece you have shown that you know how to get things done with some quality, now just a few tweeks here and there.

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Alright so with this piece it was good and you showed the quality and the imagination thruout maybe a few tweeks hare or there could spice it up. The whole piece was pretty good, i think only the ending was in need of some attention and maybe a bigger finish of an ending, and as mentioned some more climax there at the end.

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This piece would be perfect for some cut scenes where big armies prepare for a big battle. I also can imagine hearing this while playing some sort of strategy game like Age of Empires.

But I miss some sort of climax here. The song itself is very nice and I really like the beat. It builds up and up and I expected something big to happen. But instead the song just went on... so yeah. Basically, all you need to make this track perfect is a good climax.

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Something is brewing

This piece says to me that perparation is underway, probably for war, but byu the sound of it on some glorified mission of defence. The troops are gathering their equipment and are heading out to the front, where they will meet glory, either in victory or in death.

A well constructed beat, complimented nicely by the melody. I think that a second part is warranted, to show us how it all panned out.

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Nice

A nice intro and a good build up to a nice middle and ending, the beat was awesome and it felt very smooth and unique.

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-xIDoL

Damn..

I was hoping for more out of it I guess. The beginning was quiet, but it went along fine with the build up feeling that you got out of the song while listening. I guess I was just expecting the song to get intense and really pick up right after the quiet after the first fade. I really think that would of made this song great, but oh well. Not too bad.

C52

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