Nifty!

This is a rather nice piece! Has a nice party/ambient feel to it. The bass usage was great too!

I don't really have any suggestions. You COULD try expanding it a bit more, but that would probably take away from its simplicity and ambience.

Great job! Keep it up!

Needs work.

The bass throughout the entire song is VERY misplaced. Maybe add in some glitched drums, that'll add to the addictiveness of the piece. The synth that comes in around 1:25 should be introduced earlier. The initial bass line that came in at about 0:16 was nice, it really made me want to listen to the song more, and was slightly adrenaline pumping - which is what electronica SHOULD do. So nice job on that.

Keep trying,
Pho

I like it

You're right that the bass needs a little polishing but it's a great start. The only thing I didn't like was the revving sound that comes in at around 1:40, it just doesn't seem to fit in.

Yeah...

thats how i like electronic music. Simple but addictive. Try to come up with a longer version of this, its great!