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Sleep In Your Tomb

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***EDIT*** re recorded vocals, changed up some lyrics.


SonOfKirks KICK ASS CREATION. Asked me to put vocals on it. I hope I did it justice. Thanks for lettin me wank on it, and sorry for the delay.


Lyrics


Bring me your slaughtered
No time to be honored
Only remember the flesh


Backing of machine gun fire
Exploding ground and dying men
A flash your life you see your pain
And feel it all over again


Standing there you don't care
bodies flying everywhere
Chaos, massive death delusions
Gross humanity intrusion


SLeep in my tomb
SLeep in your tomb


Rest for the wicked now
SLeep like the dead now


Bring me your fears and
Trade it for sorrow
Nothing is owed to the slain


Show me the time spent
washing the blood off
watch it go down the drain


Bring me your slaughtered
No time to be honored
Only remember the flesh


Standing in rains and
screaming in pains
Only your blood to digest


enjoy.

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good job

I liked it, especially the guitar opening...subtly demonic over the slow tones...it was good.

The lyrics are good too, very poetic.

wow dude

hey badman

question... how do you sing? i mean shit dude this is good! i been trying all day to get a simmler power in my voice but i cant seem to have any fucking luck! maybe you can tip me. mr. hardcore? haha sonofkirks and you are just mind blowing as a team. its like me and f-777

you know every one wins!!!

I WANT YOUR FUCKING TONE

DAMNIT

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Hmm.
This is sonofkirks tone. I can't remember what he uses
thanks for the review, dudeman!
My shit is done with a pod x3

Nice track

Great tune, one of the few songs on Newgrounds with lyrics, good job, keep up the good work ;)

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks again man. I put lyrics in a lot of my songs, and other peoples too. haha. I get better with each one I do.

Thanks for listening and leaving a review, dude.\m/

Not to be a dick but

I think the music is good. I like the vocal structure and the change in styles of vocals throughout the song, but it seems to me that your potential is greater than what's displayed here.

The first 3 verses are strong. Maybe where you run out of breath, you can record only that line/or lines and start a new track; for recording purposes.

Bring... to the ...drain is also strong, but I think you should've ended the clean voice there and just let the hi-death vocal be by itself to the end.

Otherwise... very nice.

-1 point for loss of potential.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks a lot, man. This is yet, also unfinished, cause of time and my extreme lazyness...haha. But I hear what you are saying, for sure. I'm gonna have to take a couple days and get some shit polished.
Thanks for the reminders, dude. Dig your reviews a lot.
\m/

Credits & Info


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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
4.92 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 31, 2008
4:55 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
Song
7.4 MB
3 min 15 sec

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