good job
I liked it, especially the guitar opening...subtly demonic over the slow tones...it was good.
The lyrics are good too, very poetic.
***EDIT*** re recorded vocals, changed up some lyrics.
SonOfKirks KICK ASS CREATION. Asked me to put vocals on it. I hope I did it justice. Thanks for lettin me wank on it, and sorry for the delay.
Lyrics
Bring me your slaughtered
No time to be honored
Only remember the flesh
Backing of machine gun fire
Exploding ground and dying men
A flash your life you see your pain
And feel it all over again
Standing there you don't care
bodies flying everywhere
Chaos, massive death delusions
Gross humanity intrusion
SLeep in my tomb
SLeep in your tomb
Rest for the wicked now
SLeep like the dead now
Bring me your fears and
Trade it for sorrow
Nothing is owed to the slain
Show me the time spent
washing the blood off
watch it go down the drain
Bring me your slaughtered
No time to be honored
Only remember the flesh
Standing in rains and
screaming in pains
Only your blood to digest
enjoy.
good job
I liked it, especially the guitar opening...subtly demonic over the slow tones...it was good.
The lyrics are good too, very poetic.
wow dude
hey badman
question... how do you sing? i mean shit dude this is good! i been trying all day to get a simmler power in my voice but i cant seem to have any fucking luck! maybe you can tip me. mr. hardcore? haha sonofkirks and you are just mind blowing as a team. its like me and f-777
you know every one wins!!!
I WANT YOUR FUCKING TONE
DAMNIT
Hmm.
This is sonofkirks tone. I can't remember what he uses
thanks for the review, dudeman!
My shit is done with a pod x3
Nice track
Great tune, one of the few songs on Newgrounds with lyrics, good job, keep up the good work ;)
Thanks again man. I put lyrics in a lot of my songs, and other peoples too. haha. I get better with each one I do.
Thanks for listening and leaving a review, dude.\m/
Not to be a dick but
I think the music is good. I like the vocal structure and the change in styles of vocals throughout the song, but it seems to me that your potential is greater than what's displayed here.
The first 3 verses are strong. Maybe where you run out of breath, you can record only that line/or lines and start a new track; for recording purposes.
Bring... to the ...drain is also strong, but I think you should've ended the clean voice there and just let the hi-death vocal be by itself to the end.
Otherwise... very nice.
-1 point for loss of potential.
Thanks a lot, man. This is yet, also unfinished, cause of time and my extreme lazyness...haha. But I hear what you are saying, for sure. I'm gonna have to take a couple days and get some shit polished.
Thanks for the reminders, dude. Dig your reviews a lot.
\m/
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.