Be kind...this is my first trance track that I did right when I finished my "Tutoring"
Basic story: I asked ParagonX9 and EliteFerrex for help with FL studio 7, ParagonX9 said no but Elite was kind enough to help me, What followed was Elite telling me most of the basics for FL studio and also gave me a few samples to use, With all the help he gave me I worked on a "Thank you" song so here it is, hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it
Thats Awsome Nice Song
I don't get why Paragon Wouldn't help you as thats very odd hmm But I Guess Eliet was the right person for you to ask also this was a nice Trance song and its nice to see other people helping out one another out it really shows you how the light of the world can over come the darkness ;D
or how a Snow storm is both deadly and gental...dunno why but thats what the tune made me think of...but i like the name sort of suits it
i had to laugh
is it sad that i can name most if not all of the tracks you are using... including the drum sequences xD.
anyway, you needed more variety in the actual rythm i did notice that you changed the actual notes once through out the whole song (rated you down a bit)
although you did use the same notes you did change the rythm of the notes (cheers to that)
Still i can't rate you below a 3 (my policy) because in all honesty it's not as bad as... my first trance AND a few others i have actually heard. It's higher than, in my opinion, some of the other first attempts.
Good job and hope to hear more from you in the future.
as long as it gets an average review score of over 7 i'm happy to be honest
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Tik115 
