Cadillak gangsta 1970s

To me, this sounds like a Devil may Cry song. Great work.

once again revewing while listening

the tune from 0:01-0:25 goes on too long 0:26-0:38 bump u the backround sound taht comes in it would sound great the vocals from 0:39-1:00(i think) i acully dont mind just need to be a bit louder for me but not too loud 1:05-1:15 i have no complaints about the rest of the song pretty dam good

not bad

At 0:25, seriously turn up the backround noises that come, it would add to the over all dark feeling of the song, and put it in longer strides. Oh and make a instrumental version in my opinion

Nice but missing something

I like the core of the song. The beginning is nice and the lyrics need some tweaking but are generally well done. Reminds me of Nu-metal like korn or Linkin Park.
However you are really lacking in three areas. First, diversity: the song is a whopping 5 minutes and there are no major changes following the first minute. It gets plain boring. Second, the drums are way too simple. With a song like this you need a heavy, fast and rich drum beat to move the song forward and fill those empty spots. I recommend adding more metal and deeper bass to the drums. Finally, the guitar starts off good but it never gains in complexity or richness. The simple crisp of the guitar gets real old real quick.
Because of these problems the song feels a bit empty and lacking substance. i think you are onto the right idea though.