5/5 = 4.37/5.00(+0.0015)

You will finish this or else I'll defenestrate your soul!
Nah, I'd probably just cry about it.

ROCK ON X) X) X) X) X) X) X) XD

oh yeah fucking cool

can you make a long versoin?

damn good demo

this has soooo much potential. You might want to turn the volumes down a little bit. I can't tell what it is, but something in the tune or the beat sounds pretty fuzzy. Good job with this one tho. can't wait for the final v.

cooolz

the concept sounds good, but yeah, its clipping a bunch once the percussion comes in. the drums sound like theyre being shoved down in the mix, which isnt so great, and the snare roll is way too fast to be like comprehensible haha. so work on that mixing stuff :) i think that fuzz is a minor problem compared to some other stuff in the track :)

in terms of the melody, this is totally decent :D not exactly lightspeed-feeling to me, but definately a very euphoric and fun melody to follow :) the arpeggiating synth in the background is good, too, but i wish the sawtooth stabs werent so... cliched hehe. it makes the song sound like any other song. cmon! explore! hehe.

thats all i got for this tiny loop. hope i helped!

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not bad man

there are a lot of things that could be tweaked. its sounds really cool for just a demo. i hope to hear this in the future all done
5/5
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