Eehh......

I don't like the vocals, could use some work but not bad as far as the beat itself. The beginning sounded more poppish, but it started to get upbeat, eh it was alright. Not exactly my style but I think this song could use a little work as far as structure. Nice attempt though.

Keep playin',

Realz (RF)

Nice.

This song is pretty interesting musically, and well put together. I think if you tighten up the vocals it could be pretty awesome. You sound like you were kinda tired or something in that take. Where's the passion?! Haha, just kidding. I like the guitar a lot. It's pretty rad. Keep it up.

not bad

Voice needs a bit of work :P

Also sounds a bit scratchy.