TERRIBLE and AWESOME

This is a pretty good loop, I like it. But OH MAN this could be a cool song too. It seems a little too short-- but it loops well, but it does become a little anoying after the fifth time around or so.
BUT
This is an awesome sample, if you could do something else with this it would be incredible. Please don't get discouraged or anything because you've got a lot of skill here, just in execution it's not quite as great.
6 for the loop
10 for the sample
8 for the submission
5 for the rating.

its not finished... yet

Yes its a loop, but in my opinion its missing the following.

A loop should be short but powerfull, that means that if a loop is only 20 seconds, it still should contain ENOUGH sounds to avoid boringdome after hearing the line 3 times. It should have layers so that every time the song starts over again, it makes me realize that I havent heared all sounds yet.

I know this is very difficult to create but if you just take this as a basic and start to work it out *around* this original basic, it would become more intresting.
Another tiny thing that annoys me is the ending, the last tone does not fit with the start of the track and its kinda confussing.

I hope that this advice helps you on your creative path to master the tiny things that makes a track *that something special*

No offence, only advice as I try to share my point of view with my own creativity.