Good for a loop.
The drums were nice, I could tell a lot of effort went into critiquing the notes, but it could make my ears ring after a while, because the snare shrieked with the main melody.
It is good when you get the loops going solo, offers a good range.
Sometime it helps to have the bassline nothing like the main melody itself, anything, just nothing the same. And the drums need to also hold more of that bass feel. Get a groove like that and it'll go with a lot of groups. Thumbsideways.