Sad but needs more!
I feel like I am waiting for something to come and fill a major void in the song! Anyway keep up the good work, it's pretty good for your first.
Author Comments
Yea this is my first song and so I am still getting used to everything, trust me it will get better.
I'll probably come back to this song sometime later. Feel free to constructively critisize my work.
Hope everyone likes it.
Also I didn't mean to have that extra melody at the very end of the song after it has all gone silent, that was my bad just don't mind it.
::EDIT:: Wow top 30 of the week. Thats very unexpected considering how basic this song is, oh well.
Check out my other song, its much better.
There will be much more to come and ill probably come back and remake this song once im experienced.
-DFP-
Ephemeral-DFP responds:
Ya I agree with you it is missing something, my newer stuff is much better.
-DFP
lol lets all be happy
''Guys! Jimmy is dead!'' Hura!!!! Yeah! feel good about this guy who died!
The only thing I didnt really like was the constant beat.Head ache!
other than that, the mel could have been just picking it up.Its not pro yet, but your really geting there!
Ephemeral-DFP responds:
Ya I couldnt find a nice bass and didnt kno exactly what I was doing with FL Studio yet.
Thanks for the review.
Hmm
It was alright. I was always waiting for something to happen during the song. May be something is just missing.
Ephemeral-DFP responds:
Ya, it was my first song so Im gonna come back to it once Im more experienced.
Cool!
Length is good and this is otherwise good. Good enough to download this on my playlist =D
Ephemeral-DFP responds:
Thanks, im glad you liked it.
whoever died had a bad taste in dramatic music
It's a good song, but out of curiosity, what's with the name?
Ephemeral-DFP responds:
Ya the name had nothing to do with the song lol.
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