I noticed it go off beat quite a few times

But overall, I liked it. it reminded me a TON of Golden Sun, so I thank you for the nostagia :)

A couple errors, nice try though

I liked the idea, had some potential.. BUT...! I'm picky on how repeatitive some things are.. but when theres no repetition at ALL.. it sounds like you took a bunch of stuff and mashed it together, let's face it, it makes it sound rushed, or you were lazy, I'm not being mean, but please, try and look into how it's going to appeal before you do this, the notes changed too much too fast, the tempos sped up and down like a haywired rollercoaster. No good entrance, just mashed in there.. no good ending, also mashed in there... Sorry man, try again next time.

Effort: 2 stars
Variety: 1 stars
Smoothness: 0 stars