Nice

So this was different and I like what you presented here with a nice vibe about it all very nice tune and just great feel to it even amusing at times I like the work though very nice style and you should really make more like this a good tune indeed so nice energy in this one too

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Not sure really this was retty good maybe make more

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Haha

lmao, not too steady rhyming, but the verses are all sublime. "Got more soul than the bottom of a shoe", haha, hillarious, wish there were more raptracks like this one, good background beat, great lyrics, keep it going!

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I hope this is supposed to be a joke track....