chunky as spew!
as always, your riffs have done my head in, over and through itself!
there are some good change-ups in this one... it's pretty catchy too.
Author Comments
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PenguinBomb responds:
:D gotta love drop Bb tuning!
Promising
Very catchy beginning. Good flow into the second riff. I like the off-time riff next, but the drums seem to be too loose for the part. Maybe try to stick the drums more with the guitar part then. Other than that the splash cymbal is overused. Use a crash cymbal in some of the parts to add variety. Pretty cool ending/fade out.
I'd say clean it up a bit with my suggestions at least and the song will be enhanced. Definitely would get a higher rating then. It's a high 7 right now. Maybe 7.75, but I'm rounding down.
Any vox?
PenguinBomb responds:
haha yah I keep getting criticisms on my splash, so undoubtedly I'll be changing that in the future. And yah this is the first song I've recorded in a tuning as low as Bb, so I wasn't exactly sure how to mix it, as a result it's a little bit muddy. As for vox, I don't do 'em so that's up to others :D
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 625
- Downloads
- 69
- Score
- Waiting for 3 more votes
- Uploaded
- Nov 3, 2008
- 12:43 AM EST
- Genre
- Heavy Metal
- File Info
- Song
- 3.9 MB
- 2 min 53 sec
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