Now i just want to go check the new version out...

I really like the ending, just the perfect amount of time between the notes. And giggle, more double peddles. Gota love those drums. Hay i can see now how you introduced the percussion side and played around with it. I mean a few tracks back you had just put them in. Now your really get to it. Having heard some of your recent stuff I can really appreciate where you came from and have hope that I can get this good to =]
The sax is lush
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well its more jazz than classical

the percussion seems a tad rough, the low syth you later on put, is great but the sax rhythm doesn't really goes well in this, the proof is in the last part when the sax goes way and the rest of the sounds continue the song sounds smooth and good, the ending you should had to repeat that much of time the piano the first three time were more than enough...

The first version was good already

Hi there,
I like both versions. Here's an idea for a title that you might want or not: "Junto a me" (that's "Next to me" in Spanish... It matches with the piano) I've just thought about a very special song where one is telling the other how important is to have them next to them. And the song explains that in a very simple way. I think there is a great feeling inside this song. Yes! Great melody!

It's the greatest I've heard with a sax and piano

This JAZZ (You asked for a genre) song is great, the greatest I've heard with a sax and piano. I loved it 5/5 10/10

This works very well.

If you took out the drums and percussion or at least toned them down, the saxophone would be more of the main sound to listen to which I think it should be. That aside this is a great mellow song.