Errr

You won't stop until the entire web is enthralled by your songs, will you??? Excellent job, especially on something new to you.

revolutionary war anyone?

This piece has a nice revolutionary style march. The ideas are more than solid. Cohesion is what's holding the song back. Many of the lower pitched parts of the song fall outside the key of the melodic lines. Some of the parts stick out too far in the mix. There are segments that could use extra push from additional parts to really fill out your wall of sound. Clean her up and make it a blockbuster.