hey man. the bass
the sub bass in this was extremely thick, i thought it kinda interfered from the listeners attention. but it didnt sound bad. the thing around :50 was really cool really unique. the drums need to be just a bit punchier. this song felt really dense and i felt that there were things on the sub sonic level that werent being brought out and they needed to be. this song felt really complete, like it was orchestrated well, i didnt get bored and i was interested in hearing the whole thing which is important because for most music the human attention span usually lasts for about 3:30s.
the drum beat was good and went well for the whole song and i liked the the phaser you used on the drums such as parts around 5:00
this was a good song but work on that bass. it should consume all the attention.